Age/Gender: 23, Male
Location: ummm...
Job: Making Movies
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Your flash skills are improving, may I suggest that you start adding more love into it :-)
<3 CranberryClock
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Thats what I am talking about!
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Good loop. (filler)
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I love it, that baby made me chuckle more than anything though.
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:D Thanks cranberry.
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Nice movie, however I might suggest a few things to tweak it up.
1. Change the movie size, so you dont see the sides of white.
2. Use a different font, that is easier to read if you are not going to have voices.
3. Make sure your movie clips, (such as the Arms) are a little more fluent.
Spend a little time polishing the movie to clean up stray lines after you done.. and you have youself a decent plot and movie. Good work, you can do good I am sure of it.
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Continue making flash and spending time into it and you will be great.
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Thanks!!!
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Love it I really loved it, you have such a great imagination.
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Pretty good to make me chuckle but heres a few pointers.
You should extend them out a little bit and not make them so predictable.
You should also not focus so much sizing on the mario pixel since it looks a little blurry.
Just some info, other than that. Keep it up mang.
Author's Response:
thanks for the pointers
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This song is a bit played out but hey, you made a flash so that is respectable. I do however didnt understand the point of the guy dancing or the guy shooting himself in the head or the sticks... lol
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Made me chuckle, but definatly well overdone.
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