You need to do more than write out a few words bud. Try adding some simple animation to the project. The lack of an actual font is what was killing the movie in all honesty. Its good to emphasize hand written text, but writing everything in chicken scratch style and not using proper grammar at the beginning forced this from 1 star to 0 stars.
Keep at it, but throw at least an hour into a project, not just random timing words with a HQ song overlay.
Nice job. <3 Cran
Fifen and loved.
I love it, smooth animation, funny and made me come back a second day just to write a review. I tip my hat to you good sir.. this is one hell of a movie.
Keep it up..
Your flash skills are improving, may I suggest that you start adding more love into it :-)
Thats what I am talking about!
Good loop. (filler)
Your Getting it.. but..
Nice movie, however I might suggest a few things to tweak it up.
1. Change the movie size, so you dont see the sides of white.
2. Use a different font, that is easier to read if you are not going to have voices.
3. Make sure your movie clips, (such as the Arms) are a little more fluent.
Spend a little time polishing the movie to clean up stray lines after you done.. and you have youself a decent plot and movie. Good work, you can do good I am sure of it.
Continue making flash and spending time into it and you will be great.
Love it I really loved it, you have such a great imagination.
Made me chuckle.
Pretty good to make me chuckle but heres a few pointers.
You should extend them out a little bit and not make them so predictable.
You should also not focus so much sizing on the mario pixel since it looks a little blurry.
Just some info, other than that. Keep it up mang.
thanks for the pointers
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